Under the Storm Giants Castle

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Item Code:  93

Title:  Under the Storm Giants Castle

Type:  Scenario

System:  Dungeons & Dragons

Author(s):  Thomas A. McCloud

Date Published:  1979

Format:  32-page book

Original Price:  $3.00

A unique dungeon adventure set inside a magic cloud: a Storm Giant has his stronghold on it, but his son was kidnapped by a worm-creature that vanished into the cloud, and the players are offered great rewards to rescue him.  The booklet lavishly illustrated and mapped contains six levels and nine unique monsters. Intelligent monsters are given names and certain characteristics, and devilish traps and innovations are scattered here and there: a tornado within the cloud that takes characters from level to level without injury, and eleven new "miscellaneous magic" artifacts.

Printing Information

  • 1st Printing (1979):  Black border around cover.  States "Designed & Approved for Use Especially with Dungeons & Dragons" along with a large white "#93" and price on cover.  Product list is titled "Booty List" with the highest number being 93.

  • 2nd Printing (1980):  White border around cover.  States "Created For & Approved for Use With Dungeons & Dragons" along with a large white "#93" and price near the bottom left corner.  Product list is titled "More Fine Products" with the highest number being 180.

  • 3rd Printing (1981):  Black border around cover.  States "Created For & Approved for Use With Dungeons & Dragons" along with a small "93" and price on cover.  Product list is titled "More Fine Products" with the highest number being 460 (w premier Pegasus).

Thomas A. McCloud about Under the Storm Giant Castle: "Here is a little history on the module.  All of what follows is only from memory, any references I might have are away in storage.

Back in about 1978, I was 32, the Judges Guild ran a "Dungeon Design Contest."  The Guild set up the contest in a very curious way.  Each entrant was to submit one level of a dungeon.  The entries were then to be judged on originality, and the most original design would win.  Then, and I did not realize this when I wrote up UtSGC, the best levels were to be stitched together into one final dungeon.

I thought for awhile, and then came up with the most *original* idea I could: a dungeon that was not underground, not underwater, not overland, not in a city, but floating in the air.  It turned out to be a lot of fun drawing puffy white clouds and passages and inventing things to go with the theme, and working out what it would really be like to walk on the inside of a cloud, and so I ended writing up an entire module.

At that point, I went back and read the fine print about it being a contest for dungeon *levels*, not for complete dungeons.  Oh well. I submitted it with a note saying that I realized that it was more than the contest called for, but that I wanted to go ahead and submit anyway.

Not long after that, Bob Bledsaw called me on the phone, said that indeed what I had written was way over the top for the contest, but would I be interested in having it published as a module?  And would I be interested in writing more material for the Judges Guild?

That phone call was a very happy moment for me.  I answered "yes!" and "yes!", but you already know that.  I filled out paperwork selling all rights to JG, and--I think--submitted a manuscript tuned a bit more toward the manuscript format they wanted.

Judges Guild then ran a copy through Gary Gygax, who, in those days, had to approve every module that was to be listed as "Approved for use with Dungeons & Dragons (TM)".  Happily, or perhaps from another point of view unhappily, Mr. Gygax did not muck around with UtSGC much: cut the treasure down a little and ruined a nearly insignificant clue relating to the Pegasus' necklace.  The necklace was supposed to be a hint that the Pegasus had a kind and loving master--very unusual.  However, it was too subtle a hint anyway.

The people at Judges Guild then added a cover and illustrations by Paul Jaquays.  I was not consulted about either one.  The artwork inside is okay, I guess, but I hate the cover.  Why do I hate the cover? Because it has nothing, absolutely nothing, to do with the adventure.  When I asked Bob Bledsaw about it, he said that he had wanted to get it to print quickly, so used an archive artwork that was the only one he could find that had something to do with a castle.

The cover art is still a sore point with me.  The adventure is a light, happy, breath of fresh air and goodness.  The cover is a dark, brooding miasma of evil.  Whichever way you may want your adventures, the cover art and the adventure *don't match up.*  I honestly believe that this is a major factor in Under the Storm Giant's Castle being sometimes called the worst module that the Judges Guild ever produced.

Another factor, perhaps, is that some Judges may not realize that UtSGC is designed as a beginner's dungeon.  It's a "starter adventure," if you will.  For the Manteca campaign, mentioned above, every player started a first level character.  By the end, a few were well into fourth level.

Let's see, anything significant that I haven't mentioned yet?  Oh, yes.  The "linearity" This is a bit of an oddity for two reasons.  First, each level connecting by only one path to the next was, if I remember correctly and I'm not at all sure that I do a design rule for the contest.  Second, once players learn that they can dig their own tunnels, the adventure goes from linear to random access.  When I run the adventure, this has been the difference between players struggling with the dungeon and the players having it all but conquered."
Under the Storm Giants
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