mbassoc2003 wrote:Yes. Level 3 and Level 4 are supposed to be on separate pages and the PDF has been printed with Levels 3 and 4 overlapping on the one page. The corrected file is available, but it's not available to DFer through the website. Via direct e-mail only as per the current DF thread. So why not just chage the file on DF so everyone can have it?You've got the corrupted copy I have.
Badmike wrote: the "flow" of the module and if it's clear in it's purpose and intentions, and whether it meets the standards of even other "amateur" publications.
sauromatian wrote:Certainly there are flow problems (mostly due to sentence length or comma placement), & after a little more reading I've found many more typos. There's quite a bit of awkward phrasing. 2-3 days work for a good editor to fix, although ferreting out internal inconsistencies could take some time.I take it that quite a few people have worked on this book over the years? Maybe it was a problem of too many cooks, each with their strengths & weaknesses as writers.
mbassoc2003 wrote:I notice the "1st Edition January 2010" on the back sheet. Let's go through it and proofread it. Seperate the two maps (Crest 3 and 4) onto adjacent sheets, and release a 2nd Edition.
FormCritic wrote:Nothing to stop anyone from making their own, edited version, with old-school maps and offering it back to the creators...is there?
ashmire13 wrote:I'm going to kinda have a look at doing that myself, although I can't seem to get the old-school maps in hand.I also don't have a pdf creator but I can switch it from pdf to word.Not sure how far I'll go with this, but I'm going to give it a go over the next two nights.
mbassoc2003 wrote::oops:Would like to have seen your avatar, Fid.
mbassoc2003 wrote:Suppose not, but I'd imagine it'd go down like a lead balloon.
Fid wrote:Would have liked to have you as a proofer a couple years ago if you're as good as claim!
mbassoc2003 wrote:I volunteered at the time.I have been asked to go through it pending re-release.